Sunday, December 27, 2009

I Miss You

Him "I'm sorry"

Her "baba tiwafa"

Him "adree"

Her "and you leave me like that right, not even a msg"

Him "kint abeech tinsainee"

Her "tadree ina 3omri mara7 ansak"

Him "adree"

Her "then why did you leave me all lonely"

Him "madre shagoolich"

Her "3ayal latgool"

She wanted to hug him
Kiss him
Welcome her long lost husband back

But she couldn't
Where was he the past seven years
Where was he when she went to bed
Where was he when she woke up in the morning
Where was he when she was waiting for him on the bench in the train station
Where was he when her father died
Where was he.....






She ran up the stairs
As the tears flew away

She grabbed the shirt that she hugged for the past seven years and wore it
She finally wore it
She can wear it then wash itBecause she has the actual wahabi waiting for her downstairs

She wanted him to wait
Just like he made her wait

She knew he had a good reason but she deserves to know it before she suffers

But then again

Thinking about it he had no good reason, her being his wife should accept him in every state he is

That's why she sat there with the door slightly open

Waiting for him
Waiting for an explenation

After about fifteen minutes he came
He peeked from the door
Looked for her and found her
He saw his love sitting on the bed

He smiled
A smile of sorrow and pain
All he wanted was her between his arms

Nothing but that
He slowly walked over to her

Trying not to disturb her thoughts

He sat behind her hugging her

He hugged her from her stomach

Moved her hair to the side
And kissed her neck
That's when the tears started rolling down his face
He hugged her tighter

Him "a3shigich"

She said nothing
She was furious
Although she was sad and wanted to break down but she held her emotions and stayed silent

She held them for seven years she thought

A few more moments won't hurt

He took of her shirt

Him "you won't need this anymore"

He touched her bare bodyit paralyzed her

She sighed
Leaned back
And closed her eyes
He kissed her forehead

Him "can I explain"

She nodded while her eyes were still shut

He told her the story
She kept listening
She held his hand
She was silent it freaked him out

Him "7ayati"

Her "hmm"

She hugged him
She said nothing
She only hugged him

"I miss you" was all she said

He was glad she understood

But they kept something from each other
That night they slept together
All cuddled up

And that was the end of them
Their life


I miss you

Were the last three words she said
And the last three words he heard

20 comments:

nemo;* said...

FIRST!
I think...
OMG!! L.O.V.E it!! <3
but what did they die?? why is it the end of them?? and why is is it the last words he heard??? plzz dont let them die!
luv ya;*

Anonymous said...

what???? :S im confused ish9ar:S
love it
love u
G*****

identity said...

did they die?:O:O:O:O
mashala amazing mashala im LOVING this story! and the way u write!!
mashala! again loving this story!
love you!

Red said...

awal shay il7idilaaaaaaaaa 3ala il salamaaaaaaa sorry i couldn't comment 3ala il previous post bas il bb 5araf 3alay wallah taw ma nawirat likuwait ;**

o thanee shay :o :o :o SHE DIED!!! wila shino??? Monwa raja2an fahmeenee bas il post iyaniiiiiiiiin mithil ilee katbita wallah I loved it ;D

o I LOOOOOOVE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU ;****

M76;** said...

WHAT SHES DEAD??

FMA said...

):
Kisar kha6ry wahab:*

Anonymous said...

7adda am loving this ! love ur writing <3
take care ;**

J said...

amazingly written:*
but wait wait .. SHE DIED?! :O

Anonymous said...

very well written :)

Touch My Soul said...

!!!!!!!!!

did she DIE?!

Anonymous said...

what happend?!

laaa!! please let them stay together!!!!;S

PinkWorld ~S.S~

Anonymous said...

what happend?!

laaa!! please let them stay together!!!!;S

PinkWorld ~S.S~

Anonymous said...

what happend?!

laaa!! please let them stay together!!!!;S

PinkWorld ~S.S~

Anonymous said...

mashallah ur a truly talented writer!! bas shesalfa did they die?

Blue lilies;* said...

heyy..i used to be a sielent reader and i just made an account!;D
i LOVE your story:* alah ikhalilich ya3goub oo 7amani inshalah:*
why so said;( alah yir7amhom!;p

Blue lilies;* said...

ohh yeah and FIRSSSTT !!
-first time to comment and first to comment on this post:)

A Citizen of Earth said...

Hhhhhhh!!!!! Please don't tell me mataw!!! :(

Amazing piece mashalla bss I don't get it. What happened to him?

You know what, don't mind me! It's probably there blatantly obvious for all to see and I just mindlessly read over it. I'm so scatter-brained these days.

Anywho! I really enjoyed reading this story. Every moment was an absolute pleasure. I can tell you enjoyed it too, oo adri min kafi ga3da 2a2alif bss ma3alay 6awfeeli. Try writing some more stuff like this, you're good at it! :D

Happy new years!! (in advance ;D)

A Citizen of Earth

Chuckles ;* said...
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Chuckles ;* said...

whaat?? they died??? hoow? whyy?? im confused... bas i loved it <3!! amazing x

That Perfect Someone said...

what happened :o ?!
lovin' this and love the way u write :D!