Thursday, October 7, 2010

i... Sharon... The Nanny... *11A*


I woke up at 5:30 am. Took a bath and wore my uniform. I headed 
downstairs where the rest of the servants were. Everyone was busy doing their job; some were cleaning and others were ironing. Some were preparing the breakfast others were cleaning the pool. Every time Madame Huda’s children slept over we knew that there will be a mini pool party the next day. So now I'm getting there things ready before they wake up.

The clock struck 9, and the screams started.
"3thmaaaaanoo!" suleiman screamed

"rayoom yalla goomay" '3zlan called out.

"ayyy 7amadd" lama screeched. They all changed and headed to the breakfast. The girls arrived minutes earlier. Facing each other so their plan would work. What was it God knows. They sat there waiting for the boys to come with lama. They all walked in and Suleiman carried Lama. 3thman sat next to lama, 7amad on '3zlans right and'3azi next to him. Then 3abdalla sat at the head of the table which depressed '3zlan. At that moment I knew they planned for each girl to sit next to the guy she likes. Unfortunately only Reema was lucky. 
'3zlan was disappointed. Suleiman sat at the end and Lama next to him. They all ate and talked. They always had a lot of fun when they were together but not for '3zlan this time. After breakfast they hanged out in the playroom until it was time to swim. 3thman was always with Reema, the boys were playing play station, Suleiman did a  boring puzzle just to make Lama happy. '3zlan sat all alone, she felt weird sitting there just thinking about him and wanting only to talk to him. Everyone was busy having fun and she was left all alone. She quietly went out to the pool took of her cover up and went in the swimming pool. She decided she wanted to relax so she floated and closed her eyes, she layed there thinking; is it worth it? Is it wrong? Isn’t she too young to think like this?  She then dozed off and went to sleep. It felt like she slept for hours then she felt someone hold her so she woke up instantly. And there he was holding her.

"hey" he said.

"hi" she replied.

"laish za3lana ilyoum?"

"min gal?"

"intay"

"I didn’t"

"It shows, plus why are you hear all alone? Laish manadaitai a7ad?"

"abe alone time"

"from me ba3ad?"

"ee"

"afffaa.. Mino ams promised me igoli kilshay"

"yeah well it seems like I don’t keep promises"

"tabene a5aleech?"

"ee please"

He was really hurt he got out of the pool took his shirt and went up to his room. He didn’t think that she would break a promise. Just like his mom. The kids all went to swim a few minutes after Suleiman went upstairs. She felt guilty for telling him a lie, she was really happy when he came to her. She sat for a few minutes thinking and decided to go up to him….


Do you guys like where I am going? I need ten comments to write another post.

As for the previous comments ill reply to them when I can;**

15 comments:

HaBaHeBo said...

Continue(y)!

Darliam said...

msaakeeen el yahal ...
omhom mushkela!! 3yalha shthanbhom
kafy they lost a father!
she has to move on!

slman yakser el khaaa6er!!!!

nice post
love u :*

Madliar said...

Yepp yepp I like it!
Please carry onn!:D

Post soon ;;*
Love you gn!

Faith said...

wayed 7elwaaa!! 7ail 7ailll!! yala waiting 4 the nxt post wayed mshta6a

Unchained Melody said...

yeees pleeease. continue ;*

said...

I love it<3
I do! It's beautifully written;*
Keep it going ;)

Rawan said...

eeee i like it!

M76;** said...

Its marvelous! Extraordinary

Anonymous said...

Amassing post, and yes I like where the story is going. Post soon plzz.
-A

A Citizen of Earth said...

It's refreshing to see this confusion finally emerging.

I am definitely excited to see where this is going.

I'm sorry for writing such a short response. Blame the lab report I just did.

I also like the fact that Sulaiman made the connection between '3izlan and his mother. It shows how big of an impact his mother's alienation is on him.

-A Citizen of Earth

Anonymous said...

Eee 7adda we like it 3ajeeba ur story ;**
Post as soon as u can plz !
Tc
-Jo

Anonymous said...

Its Amazing .. it showz that ywr a talented writter =) .. enshallah u complete till the end ..
w ur story is the best from everything i read because it doesnt talk about only love or trust it talkz about alot of thingz
mashallaah 3laaich ur obviously taleneted
-Miss bee ;)

Anonymous said...

TOOO SHORT :S

TOOOO CUTE

early emotional phase

**M

Anonymous said...

7araaaam maskeen kesar 5a6ry post soon


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Blue lilies;* said...

7aram slumnain!
NEXTT POST PLEASE!:*